looks really nice, but the shadow of the "a" is on the wrong side. We can look at the top of the block the A is on, but the shadow suggests the bottom, darker, side of the "a" is visible.
Oh nice ! I haven't think about it, thanks I think there should be a shadow though, but maybe smaller, and surely the light on top of the "a" should be bigger.
But not too much because the "a" hasn't got many volumes anyway. I should also diminish the white line on bottom of the block, I don't know why it appears here ^^ The shadow should be made new too.
Thanks for your critics, now that I think about that I only see it and it's bad !
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